Sela Locke

Huh. I don't nitpick s'much, so I'm just gonna look it over and give you my impressions, a'right? A'right. Like Mr. Sureal said, the purple prose is - well, let's ...

Stephenie Meyer is not a good author. The characters are useless and cliche, the plot line is sickeningly cheesy, and the dialogue could be written by my five-year-old brother. Okay, ...

I like it. I like it. I liiiike it. Oh, two mistakes. You put 'one's' instead of 'ones'. And something else that I forgot. Besides, Mr.-everyone-hates-me-and-I'm-a-fake-chiropractor's voice is distrac

Hai! Sela here, to review your 'pathetic love story', so called. =D First and foremost, let's not make the name of our stories self-deprecation for lack of better titles, yes? ...

Well, obviously there are pessimistic people out there, and I'm not saying he's a bad character - just that, unless you were hoping we'd despise the guy, you could perhaps ...

My, my, my. How silly you were. I would critique, but rather imagine, as usual, that I would look poor, puny, and particularly pathetic. So - I love it, especially ...

Wow, Prok. Way to really give him a review. -JKnudge&eyeroll- I liked it - the story didn't info dump too much, and the main character seemed to be getting a ...

Alright! I'm not one much for nitpicking, and especially not when the actual work needs help. In your case, it really does. Now, don't get me wrong -- not all ...

All right! I suppose, since you asked, I can stop a moment to review this interesting work. A few nitpicks first... The night was dark and moonless.Clouds crowded the sky.Down ...

I'm not going to nitpick, but I'm really curious - do you want us to despise Marshall? Because I sure as heck do. He's a whiny, snappy, somewhat slow guy ...

Wow. See, Tote, here's the awesome thing about you, and your ridiculous writing skills. You can make no sense at all, and I still get it. I've never, ever found ...

Uh, n-nope. Nope. I don't get it. Why are you so ridiculously good? It's simply not fair. But I do like the reference to Companions of the Night... -clingstoEthan- Ahem! ...

I don't know if these were actually supposed to be vampires, but they were so watered down I was almost reminded of Edward Cullen. Vamps are predators, evil-doers, and murderers. ...

I liked the structure and the style - not bad at all. I suggest reading it over for the occasional typo or punctuation mistake. Other than that, no need for ...

Okay, I don't know if English is your first language, but there were oodles of tense mistakes in this chapter. You went from past to present and present to past ...